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Reviews For: The Humanoids

disneydork 2008-05-22 ch 2,	abuseOoh, I really like this story! Great job. Really really good. Interesting plot, reminds me a bit of Maximum Ride with the whole sci-fi feeling of it, but it's really original and extremely entertaining to read. I hope you update soon! Thanks for posting! -disney
Person. Yes, person. 2008-03-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseA little bit on the book "Maximum Ride" bandwagon. I'm assuming you've read it. 'Cept theres rwo of them and they go to school.
Loved1 2008-03-18 ch 2,	abuseNice story. I liked it. Keep it going! (please?)
roughdiamond5 2007-12-04 ch 2,	abuse(gasp) NO! Run, run for your lives Claire and Devin! Before the evil scientists get you, quick! Sorry, I couldn't help adding that. :D Anywhose, it was fun hearing about a robot's POV of our lives and the cliffie was unfair but appropriate in a situation like this. There's just one little thing that's been knawing at me, does Claire have any sort of weakness? I mean, it'd be pretty boring if she was totally and completely perfect. :P I'm sorry for the criticism, I just had to say it! Now, can you update soon? Because I would positively love that. :) Uh oh, gotta go, but please at least try to update!
FlamingFlie 2007-12-04 ch 2,	abuseSorry this took me a long time to review, and I suck at being constructive and I would yell THIS STORY SUCKS, but it's not true so there goes the critisism ( sp ) part. So update soon, I love it and I'm on gingerbread guard ( keeping my dog from having an early snack ) ~ Flamingflie
SilverwingedShadow 2007-11-26 ch 2,	abuseO.O Evil. Cliffe. Very. Evil. Cliffie. What in the world happens!? Please, update soon! For my sanity!
A Tahitian Stalker 2007-11-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseBy now you've probably realized WHO I am, if you haven't then you'd be a lot dumber than I've later assumed ( in truth you seem very smart) and just to let you know, so that you don't think that I am going to make a cult against it or something ( because I very well might establish a cult, this is just not the time or place for such a subject) I liked your story, it was maxish, yet very un-maxish, and you even got that nice shiny copyright at the bottom... I have a FP account that I created 2 days ago, but am too lazy to add you to favorites and will some time or other, just tell me when you update until then and I will gladly consume your words. TILL THEN AND WHEN I STALK YOU! ~ A Tahitian stalker ( or am I?)
roughdiamond5 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseHello mergirl! Well, you can find my profile now that I'm reviewing. Warning: it is very long and most people tell me (quoted loosely) "DANG, woman, long profile much?" You have been warned. Anywhose, onto the review: (drool) I liked it the moment I read the first line to be honest. Amazing, it's somewhat like Max Ride and yet it's completely different! I'd go deeper into that, but I don't have all the time in the world. Well, I put this on my alert for a reason, so please make me the happiest girl in the world and UPDATE! Seriously, I could use one for the road, considering I need to clean and clean and go to the airport and pick up my relatives and make small talk and clean and entertain and clean and take over for mom, so guess what? MORE CLEANING. I'm going to be seriously grouchy but an update would make everything better. :)
SilverwingedShadow 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseO, I like this story. Hehe, Devin's funny for some odd reason... I want more! Update soon!

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