aw so sweet
:D
i think you should continue kiara and michael's story
:D
i wanna see the together!
:D:D:D:D
but thats just me
lol
please update soon!!

I'm not sure if I want to praise this story for it's accuracy in it's commentary about girl code or be critical of how much starting over like that really doesn't work. As usual the writing was fabulous, but I have come to expect a touch more reality from your stories Annie. I'm probably being bitter and taking it out on your story but I think there was some discussion about their issue that was ommitted in the final copy that seems like it should have made it's way in. The trademark characterization still made me smile though :-).

Haha, I was wondering why I felt like I'd read this before.
...but I can't remember from where.
Anyhow, I quite enjoyed that.
I especially kind of like the bittersweet ending. =)

TECHIE!
i liked this one the best so far (just thought you should know)
:)

“Do I look four years old to you?”
“Oh, so now you know me?”
"you can hear the anxiety ill-disguised as nonchalance."
“I hate you.”[...]“Love you too, Kiara,”
"Your words are undeniably harsh, but your frustration is having free reign on your thoughts."
“What—? Did you not hear a single word I just said?!”

All these lines I just highlighted because they are pointers to the sophisticated emotions and sentiments that you manage to capture in one line. They're conversations I've had, that I've known, that I dream about. They are amazing, and the realism is too striking to stop for a single moment.

"The fist" -> "The first"

lol this is...interesting. i like it. it's just weird that i'm all over this story.

Youd need more days off. I got home today it there were 3 new chapters! It was beyond exciting! and they were amazing chapters too and this one is the end of a story I read a really long time ago so I finally get to know how it ends yay!!

FINALLY! It's been so long since you've written anything but Unforgettables. I think I've read this but it's still awesome :D

I love all these stories! They should be published!

I think I may review every single chapter.

You have a way with words that I envy.

-C.K.

I love this one as well.

I love all the happy endings you've created. It gives me hope for my own love life.

-C.K.

I cried reading this.

I've been crying to much lately.

-C.K.

This feels like July.

Well we all know my reaction to this one *cough cough*
lol but Annie you couldn't have possibly changed the names? I mean I love that I'm in one of your stories but you know... Yeah... Still love it though :D
(Submit this one to SKoW but change the names first!)

Aw :D
that's so good... I must point out you have an extra quotation mark in there somewhere but the quality of the story just makes up for your typo :P And once again I feel incredibly out of the loop, why didn't I even know there was a new PoF? Why!?!?!?! Lol sorry it's amazing annie, keep on writing