Reviews for Luminaira for lack of a better name

Hermia Alcott 2007-12-10 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is pretty good. I like the way you write, keeping to the point without going off on a tangent (like I usually do x3). I also liked the whole idea, it was really clever. Especially the last line, and the names, and how at the end she 'smiled serenely'. It makes you start off thinking that Luminaira is going to be the heroine and get swept off her feet by a handsome prince (cliched, I know), but she turns out to be the villain, in a way. That was really well done. ~faves~
Cirith 2007-12-01 ch 1,	abuseDamn...jealous ** much? Good though, if a bit short. Could have been developed much more.
Returned to the North 2007-11-17 ch 1,	abuseHehehe, for three o'clock in the morning this is actually a very intriguing fairytale. Maybe because my theater class is writing and performing original fairytales for our end-of-semester project...I could definitely see this worthy of a 15-minute theatrical short. If my group hasn't already worked three weeks on ours, I might have asked if I could have used your idea, with credit given where appropriate, of course. Ours is about kittens high on cat-nip who don't listen to their teacher, and the twist at the end is that the teacher set them up with the antagonist - whoop-dee-do! :P I love the ending. Whether or not Luminaria purposefully meant to look up, two deceiving friends would have made anyone look up in anger. Nice job.