Wow, this has a good sense of elogance, and it flows very nicely. It also did a good job evoking emotion out of me. I liked it very much.

aww so sad but its true once your rejected its hard to feel yourself again or half yourself again.

This is a beautiful poem - but you should never feel as though you need to make a fake smile to pretend you're ok. I loved the metaphor of (this hearbroken love ballad, that i'm now singing, mellowing melody;, constantantly, inside my head, thinking about you)

It was a beautiful poem, as always

-TheDJ