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crazyrandomgirl888
2008-06-19
ch 1,
abuseaww so sad but its true once your rejected its hard to feel yourself again or half yourself again.
TheDJ
2007-12-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is a beautiful poem - but you should never feel as though you need to make a fake smile to pretend you're ok. I loved the metaphor of (this hearbroken love ballad, that i'm now singing, mellowing melody;, constantantly, inside my head, thinking about you)

It was a beautiful poem, as always

--TheDJ
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