|Reviews for Broken|
| Lord Noctis 8/8/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this has a good sense of elogance, and it flows very nicely. It also did a good job evoking emotion out of me. I liked it very much.
| crazyrandomgirl888 6/19/08 . chapter 1
aww so sad but its true once your rejected its hard to feel yourself again or half yourself again.
| TheDJ 12/1/07 . chapter 1
This is a beautiful poem - but you should never feel as though you need to make a fake smile to pretend you're ok. I loved the metaphor of (this hearbroken love ballad, that i'm now singing, mellowing melody;, constantantly, inside my head, thinking about you)
It was a beautiful poem, as always