|Reviews for Stagnation|
| Aquafied 11/21/07 . chapter 1
there is something about lavender that is both alluring and depressing.
it is a pretty name.
| Smoky Bear 11/16/07 . chapter 1
beautifully put. i love the choice of image and the idea of 'icicle thin yesterdays' - just gorgeous.
| no.peace.los.angeles 11/16/07 . chapter 1
I like how you've brought color and concreteness (is that a word?) to an abstract idea such as yesterdays. Very intriguing. And once again, you've used purple! Or a shade of it, at least. Keep writing! :)
| Dale Christopher 11/16/07 . chapter 1
I like the way this flows, in that it doesn't flow naturally but works all the same. Great haiku.
| Princess-anna57 11/15/07 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really good. The best haiku I've read for quite a long time, surely. Excellent. Write on.