 NyghtRayne 2009-11-16 . chapter 43 HELO? Any one home? May was the last time you updated...and you kinda left me on a cliff hanger here...please update? i got so into the story that i have started over again while i wait for you to update...Please update soon:D
Rayne |
 Slash Rating 2009-10-22 . chapter 42Ohh, also -- is it coincidence, that Coker rhymes with Joker?~ |
 Slash Rating 2009-10-20 . chapter 43Jesus Christ, you've got me hooked. The only word I could use to describe your story, it's ADDICTIVE. The plot reels you in and all that. And it's interesting. And JESUS I love Coker. Mhot. |
 anna 2009-10-18 . chapter 43 I found this as a nomination for 'best smut' on the 'looking at the stars' m/m fic award. I thought I'd say that you did an excellent job and I really love it. I intend to read all the fictions in that nomination and I'd just like to say your nomination was well deserved. You write very good sex, and the the last scene was perfect in its awkwardness. Please update again when you can ^^ |
 saccharine lust aerial 2009-09-18 . chapter 38oh my love, won't you please continue penny candy? i am dying for the next part. it's just so god. sigh. thanks. i love you james rodriguez! :) |
 Caisele 2009-08-25 . chapter 39druggies
egh poor coker |
 Caisele 2009-08-25 . chapter 32i LOVE how u write |
 notime 2009-08-23 . chapter 43 Amazing! I found it late yesterday and read it until four in the morning. Seruiously fucking up my sleepingpattern. But so worth it.
And it's not just the characters that are wonderful, but the entire world you have created. I love how you present it as well, not really explaining it but letting details about it slip forth every now and then. It's much easier to comprehend that way. You are a fantastic writer.
Little detail, though. You say Kaz met Joker when he was seventeen, and I presume Joker died when Kaz was eighteen, nineteen and you wrote that that was eight years ago, but in chapter five you say that Kaz is twenty-three... Other than that I didn't even spot a typo.
Update soon, you have something great here. |
 mintyfish 2009-08-18 . chapter 43I AM IN SUCH SUSPENSE.
Also, I miss Lee already. :'( He is my favorite.
This is so very good and I hope you do get a chance to update soon! |
 Caisele 2009-08-14 . chapter 27lol if knowing how someone looks when they come is intimacy then im intimate with nearly all of hollywood |
 Caisele 2009-08-14 . chapter 25aww coker
hes cute |
 Caisele 2009-08-14 . chapter 23who the hell is smiley and why is he everywhere
i know hes a dancer/whre and a total maniac but other than that...lol
he bothers me make him go awayy |
 Caisele 2009-08-14 . chapter 22lol love the authors note
omg this thing has 43 fking chapters i think u wanna kill my eyes |
 Caisele 2009-08-14 . chapter 21oh lee i do love him so |
 Caisele 2009-08-14 . chapter 18angst |