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| Phantasia.89 2008-04-18 ch 15,  | abuseHi! Very sweet story, absolutely adorable. Made my day : ) Well written, I don't think I spotted any mistakes & it was beautiful in its simplicity (i.e. no conflict, breakups due to exgf's etc, lol). Good luck with your future writing! |
| MistyBluePrincess 2008-02-17 ch 4, | abusehahahaha... I love this chapter. It's fun! |
| MistyBluePrincess 2008-02-15 ch 3, | abuseGirl you are evil! LOL! He is too good to be gay! LOL! they truly fit and I love them together... your style of writing is cool. Reminds me of my old classical fave authors. Keep it up! Nat |
| MistyBluePrincess 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseHey! I love the beginning. The imagery and descriptions were onkey and very needed. The tone stays constant and the characters are refreshing. It seems to be a beautiful fic and I will have to read it all when I have a chance. Keep it up. NR P.S. I am wishing that Matt is not gay- he seems really cute. :-) |
| jacksy 2007-12-05 ch 15, | abusesuch a great story! I'm sad it ended :( lol hope to see more of you in the future! |
| vio923 2007-12-05 ch 15, | abuseLoved the ending! The two of them are great together. |
| FireFallon 2007-12-05 ch 15, | abuseAw That's about all I can say right now. Now if only all men could take their cues from Matt the world would be such a wonderful, not to mention beautiful, place to live. Amazing story, can't wait to see what you put out next, hopefully it will be as good as this one was! |
| LeticiaTokioHotel 2007-12-05 ch 15, | abuseaw...nice ending! Wonderful story! No more 'update soon' anymore...lol Bye! |
| outsidersgirl 2007-12-05 ch 15, | abusea good story |
| FireFallon 2007-12-04 ch 14, | abuseOkay so that went better than I thought it would...but I can't wait to see how you end this! :) |
| outsidersgirl 2007-12-04 ch 14, | abusethey got her back |
| vio923 2007-12-04 ch 14, | abuseThat put Sarah in her place. LOL Hopefully she will not contact Matt again. Matt can also blame her for postponing his fun evening with Kirsty -- he got it but late. |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-12-03 ch 13, | abuseI like Debbie... she seems nice to Kirsty...cant wait to see what happens next between Sarah, Matt and Kirsty... |
| FireFallon 2007-12-03 ch 13, | abuseThere is only way this can end and that is in total disaster... *cowers in fear* |
| starzdestiny 2007-12-03 ch 13, | abuseall i can say is...interesting!! |