yeah! I like Sarah, she's cool, but I think Jason is still my fav. character. Neways, not much happening in this chap. mostly filler. but I can't wait for the next chap. -crystal

I like Sarah she's really understanding. I also like Jason, he is my fav. character so far. I can't wait to read chapter 4! -crys

This was really good! I read vtgib's first and there were a couple of differences, there were also some typos but that's ok, we all makes mistakes. ^-^ I absolutly love this story so far! Can't wait to read chapter 2 (3)! -crystal

Good job. I don't see what you added in, though. Anyways, I just thought it would be nice to write a review. One thing you could do better is if you acually called Sarah's aunt and uncle her aunt and uncle instead of her guardians. So, that's it. Bye.