Reviews for A Story of Two Shy Lesbians

Reviews For: A Story of Two Shy Lesbians

kool-aidrocks2008 2008-06-26 ch 1,	abuseaw. that was real cute
slash.obsessed.fangirl-42 2008-04-28 ch 1,	abusefemslash is good too. and this was amazing. i love your characters. great story! (sorry, i'm not bubbly anymore. -shrug-) --kyra
Cittywolf 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseHeh heh heh. It's cute. I'm a little fangirl and I usually like yoai, but this is adorable. Alright, critisicm. I think you shouldn't have had Lacey punch the wall. The entire story was well thought out and had a good...beat, if you get that. But when she punched the wall, it was like you hit a high note in the middle of a low song. It didn't fit. Everything after that is good and I like it. Keep writing! Oh, and by the way, I wasn't directing my comment at you. At that time I had five reviews, three telling me that my story was bad..ish and should be on Fanfiction and the other two telling me it was good and should be on Fanfiction. To say the least I got a bit pissy. Thanks for your reviews though. Cittywolf
Crying-Without-Tears 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abusetitle kinda caught my atention HAHA nice inspiration and i never saw the sweeney todd play..
Hime 2007-11-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseSo heartwarming ^^... Me encanta!It's an awesome story!Thank you for this wonderful story.
MBaxter 2007-11-16 ch 1,	abuseI feel like it's too short. Barely get enough time to start getting the feel for it, and it's over. Though I suppose since it's a one shot, it's going to be short. I think you're a good writer though, so keep up the good work. Baxter
ProcrastinationLUVSme 2007-11-16 ch 1,	abuseDUDE! I seriously need to put you on author alert cuz you always post things and i forget to review! Anywho... good job holmes!
Indirect Object 2007-11-16 ch 1,	abuseThis is cute. It was a bit confusing with the flashback, because you seem to have accidentally only italicized half of the flashback, but other than that it was good. Keep writing :)

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