I love the end, it's so cute..the whole story I mean but I like the end best^^

aw. that was real cute

femslash is good too. and this was amazing. i love your characters. great story!

(sorry, i'm not bubbly anymore. -shrug-)

--kyra

Heh heh heh. It's cute. I'm a little fangirl and I usually like yoai, but this is adorable.
Alright, critisicm. I think you shouldn't have had Lacey punch the wall. The entire story was well thought out and had a good...beat, if you get that. But when she punched the wall, it was like you hit a high note in the middle of a low song. It didn't fit. Everything after that is good and I like it.
Keep writing!
Oh, and by the way, I wasn't directing my comment at you. At that time I had five reviews, three telling me that my story was bad..ish and should be on Fanfiction and the other two telling me it was good and should be on Fanfiction.
To say the least I got a bit pissy. Thanks for your reviews though.

Cittywolf

title kinda caught my atention
HAHA
nice inspiration
and i never saw the sweeney todd play..

So heartwarming ^^... Me encanta!It's an awesome story!Thank you for this wonderful story.

I feel like it's too short. Barely get enough time to start getting the feel for it, and it's over. Though I suppose since it's a one shot, it's going to be short. I think you're a good writer though, so keep up the good work.

Baxter

DUDE! I seriously need to put you on author alert cuz you always post things and i forget to review! Anywho... good job holmes!

This is cute.

It was a bit confusing with the flashback, because you seem to have accidentally only italicized half of the flashback, but other than that it was good. Keep writing :)