Reviews for Not So Electrifying

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dragons moon angel 2008-07-23 ch 4,	abusei love the story so far!
Ella Way 2008-06-22 ch 5,	abuseI love the way the story's unfolding! You're doing a great job with the characters. I almost feel as if I know them! Love it!
Sophia 2008-06-20 ch 5, anon.	abuseI'm sorry for the typo? I was rushing. If it makes you feel any better about that typo, I was rushing because I wanted you to get to the next chapter! But now it's here; I adore it; I'm sure you had fun writing about Zane; but now please finish it :D
Lily Llynn 2008-06-11 ch 5,	abuseI'm not sure if this was your intention, but honestly, Zane gets on my nerves. I want to strangle him and beat him up at the same time. :P He kinda reminds me of London Tipton, haha. I'm glad my review is popping into your mind, hehe. That's cool. And yes, French is quite possibly the prettiest language ever. (: I haven't progressed to trying to read novels in French yet, though. An interesting update, though personally I don't think Hedwig would show Zane her song so readily (and he sucks at being incognito. XD), unless she was perhaps super desperate. But it seems she didn't plan on him singing it, so... yeah. XD Can't wait for more. (:
GrannyP 2008-06-11 ch 5,	abuseHaha! He's so cocky! How funny! This should be interesting how it will play out, with his attempt to steal her song and all. Man oh man. I didn't think he would be like that, but we'll see!
nobody.yet 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abusewow, I love your writing style! The story seems very interesting too! Ok, I might just be stupid, but what happened to Daisy? I'm a little confused.
Ella Way 2008-05-01 ch 4,	abuseLIKE OMG! ZANE TUNNY! lol anywho I'm so loving this! I want more!
Sophia 2008-04-17 ch 4, anon.	abuseHmm...pretty interesting. The last sentence definately pokes at me and makes me want to read more, but no, there is no more becuase someone hasn't finished it yet! I like how we get to see Hedwig (what kind of name is that?) more. Brava! Now where's my next chapter?? Hurry up, time's runnin out :)(fingers tapping)
Lily Llynn 2008-04-16 ch 4,	abuseYay! Hedwig's POV appears at last! I'd love to hear her song, btw. Or see the lyrics. XD It's kinda ironic, the track/chapter title, (well not ironic, but whatever.) because in French right now we're learning the futur simple and conditionnel tenses. Hehe. (: It's a cool update, but so so short. I'd love to see more. (: And faster. wink wink nudge nudge XD
GrannyP 2008-04-16 ch 4,	abuseOh, wow, another chapter. How neat to see a chapter from Hedwig's POV! And all this time I thought she would be a minor character just there to grumble about Alyssa's obsession with the goofy singer what's-'is-name. Haha, I kid. Anyway, this was pretty cool. And I think I noticed an improvement in your writing quality as well. Nice!
Sophia 2008-02-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseok...sort of awkward (the position i'm in, not the story). i really liked it and can't wait for the next chapter
Ella Way 2008-02-04 ch 3,	abuseTwo words: LOVE IT!
Lily Llynn 2008-02-03 ch 3,	abuseInteresting... cliched, of course, but very interesting. And since when do I not like cliche. XD I love Hedwig's rant. (: Update soon - this is becoming very juicy! And please let us see Hedwig's point of view! (:
BlueGorilla 2008-02-03 ch 3,	abuseOMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER IT WAS AWESOME. It's getting interesting now. I can't wait to see Hedwig's role in all of this. =)
GrannyP 2008-02-03 ch 3,	abuseAh!! The roommate! I should have seen that one coming, but I didn't! I had to go back and check that I hadn't forgotten her name or something, but it was strategically vague. Good job on your part. And hilarious that Alyssa kissed him! Keep it up!

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