zomg, i love this!
Your run on sentences are awesome, and your descriptions are also so very, very good.
hum.
-Sy

:O I love this, serisously. I love everything you write, though. no joke.

Um, when did Beckett's last name go from Williams to Hollister?
Love the story though!

what happens next! oh god i'm so anticipating the next chap X3

good work love just love it, its every interesting and additive story to read, can't wait to so what happens. i think it would be interesting if Beckett can't breath, but i will have to wait to fined out. hehe

I think I understand what you mean. ... I think...

OOUH! THIS SOUNDS GOOD! Beckett and Pixie. Hmm... I LIKE IT!

Why would he speak Spanish?

Intreaging beginning. Their names do actually sound good together...oh, and I'm not sure if you meant it to be that way, but just in case you didn't know, they don't speak spanish in Brazil. They speak portugese. that's it.