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| Thenardier 2008-03-11 ch 1,  | abuseI like this. It made me happy as it seems kinda whimsical. I love the last line. Brought a smile upon my face. |
| Doc Blood 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this and the notion of reverse haiku. I can't leave anything alone, so I'll have to try it. Well done. Peace, Doc |
| Catalan' 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseSuper!! I love the invitation in the second line. It's stated so lovingly and protectively...(don't run), take a step, my child (I will help you) to see... Catalan' |
| Kusje 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI adore the second and last lines. It was the icing on the cake, honestly. The first line brought such imagery into my head -- and the last two lines were amazing with the connection. Good job, once again. |
| sleeping Pisces 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseThat last line is amazing. I love the word use in this haiku, it's very original. Amazing work. Peace, Daze |
| Creative Jenius 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. |
| windy girl 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseI like it, especially the last line. :) -pb |