I like this. It made me happy as it seems kinda whimsical. I love the last line. Brought a smile upon my face.

I like this and the notion of reverse haiku. I can't leave anything alone, so I'll have to try it. Well done.

Peace, Doc

Super!! I love the invitation in the second line. It's stated so lovingly and protectively...(don't run), take a step, my child (I will help you) to see...

Catalan'

I adore the second and last lines. It was the icing on the cake, honestly.

The first line brought such imagery into my head -- and the last two lines were amazing with the connection.

Good job, once again.

That last line is amazing. I love the word use in this haiku, it's very original. Amazing work.

Peace, Daze

Very beautiful.

I like it, especially the last line. :)

-pb