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| unshattered 2007-11-25 ch 1,  | abuseYour writing is amazing, I know exactly how you feel and you portray it exactly as it is. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuse"you never know what ya got until it's gone" yepp. it's so true. this is kind of pretty but i think your colorful (cussing) language took away from it. that's my only criticism other than the misspelling of the word realize. |
| Eternity is Calling 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abusepretty good, its reads nice and coherently. just a thought - i didn't think the swearing added anything to it that a careful language choice couldn't have done better. especially with a K+ rating. i understand the theme perfectly, though, its a good representation. xo liss :) |
| HiMeH 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseaw how sad unrequited love is painful huh>? |