gr [ that boy

i like the first stanza best in this one too haha i like the imagery

so much conflict

- mezzie

Aw this is sad, btu I sdtill like it. I would advise though that it can get confusing for readers to have to try and decifier what you are trying to say in your ru -together sentences. butstillgoodjob,istiloveyourwork!

this is very sad and good! Just a critique instead of havingallyour words bunched how .? It would be easier to read. Good poem. )