Holy crud...I must say, that was written beautifully. I mean, I understand first person perspective can be hard for some people to write, but just...wow. This story was executed perfectly.

I envy your skills. But in a good way.

Wow... I am speechless. That was just brilliant, and it painted a picture vividly in my mind of the entire thing. I feel like I can totally relate. This is total love for me.

You make it sound so personal. To be able to write it like this is really good. Something I couldn't have done...
This was a great story, although it wasn't a happy one!
Keep at it"
The Reverse Edge Blade

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OMG, it sounds like you and your bf are really going through some troubled times right now.

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LoL, just kidding. *grin* I know what you mean, though, about people always assuming the writing is autobiographical. I once got a reviewed that asked, "So are you going to tell us what happened to you, or does that come later? -wink-" I wrote back that nothing happened to me... unless I had amnesia that I didn't know about. I'm just good at reading people, so I'm good at writing about what I read. *shrug*

Anyway, about your piece: I loved it! It captured the thoughts/boredom of the narrator (and the frustration of the narrator's partner) perfectly! Are you possibly thinking of doing a follow-up for this piece? Maybe from the partner's PoV?

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-Shan-