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| Lachrymosa 2007-12-01 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so beautiful and it flows like such a sublime piece of poetry. It's so atmospheric without being graphic. I LOVE the mathematical and visual twists you put in this. Keep it up!! You are very inspirational =) |
| souseiki 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseEGADS! You- you- What kind of crazy comeback is this!? Whoa, I'm really glad you've found your inspiration again! This is your best work yet, I'd say... or, I don't know, each piece seems to have a different style, so this one is simply sublimely different and MAGNIFICENT. Wow. Especially that part in the middle where you weave phrases together and it all just sounds so... delicate and tangible and...oh, you make me forget my words. Somehow, the beginning reminds me of a song by Imogen Heap, but way cooler. And I find the mathematical side of it really well-thought-up of; the entire ending was breathtaking. I'm running out of adjectives again, damnit. Thanks for continuing to write, you honestly haven't lost one crumb of talent- I think taking a breather has actually improved your style, somehow. Or rather, it's made it evolve. Looking forward to new ideas! Take care, Sei x |