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| kelsi bones 2008-01-14 ch 1,  | abuseI like the comparison of frost to glass. It's really pretty =] I also like the way you say "strapped,/together, in uncertain ties." I know you mean metaphorical ties, but my saying strapped, it also conjures the image of real ties, binding two people together. NOW WRITE SOMETHING NEW DAMMIT! ... =] k.X |
| Night Silver's whisper 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, Xfail. Just so very touching. I've never read any of your work I don't think, and I deeply apologize if I am wrong and have just forgotten. Breathtaking though, truly breahtaking. Night Silver's Whisper |
| Ramenluver 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful, dear. It truly spoke to me... Cause of the situation I'm in with someone now. But I hope the ties that don't last are wicked ones. And I hope we both change for the better. -Ramen |
| mezzie 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseyou captured me in this one. the colours were great. - mezzie |
| DiaRose 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseReally lovely, as usual. A lot of good feeling is put into this, and I like it a lot. Love, ~Dia |
| rust phoenix 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery. Very beautiful. The ending was so sad, but I really like how you built up to it. "and as she turned, I caught her eye/and my intentions flew/out into the ashy air," That was my favorite part. |
| Imaginary Strangers 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI don't know why, this just totally hit me. Like it took everything that's inside of me and blew it up. I don't know. This was just beautifully horrid. Wonderful job. |