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V H Hellenstein 2008-03-05 ch 4,	abuseGood one, bravo.
effervescent-sentiments 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow. I actually really like this. It's simple, but perfect in that way. Really good work, though I question your use of "11:11"... the witching hour? I suppose you have your reasons, and I'm just not getting them. ^^
blackoutroses 2008-02-15 ch 1,	abuseThe shortness of this poem, the imagery of the clock, it's all just well written.
Alphabetical Dreams 2008-02-09 ch 6,	abuseso very, very sad. it makes me want to cry, picturing the teller at the bottom of their shower sobbing their heart out. it's such a vivid image. i really, really like that part. but it's very sad.
Alphabetical Dreams 2008-02-09 ch 5,	abusewow. it's so different from your others! but just as intensely felt, and just as emotion centered. i'm sorry you got hurt, but i'm glad you could get yourself out of it. live, laugh, love. Creating a Dream
Alphabetical Dreams 2008-02-09 ch 4,	abuseseriously, i keep thinking your poetry can't get any better, and then i click next and i'm in shock all over again! it's gorgeous. i love the part about tying your sotmach up in so many different types of knots. oh so good! live, laugh, love. Creating a Dream
Alphabetical Dreams 2008-02-09 ch 3,	abusei have shivers, it's wonderful. i love how unsure it sounds, and i really like the lines: 'so i will stick to sketching you out in poetry/becuase unlike art, it is not about skill of the hand/but skill of the heart' it's so profound! i very much like these poems, they make me feel as if i am inside an old movie... live, laugh, love. Creating a Dream
Alphabetical Dreams 2008-02-09 ch 2,	abuseoh my... these are incredible. i really like this one, the dialogue is a really good touch. it made me laugh! it's just so thuroughly emotion centered, and it makes me feel what the subjects are feeling. augh... now i'm all giddy. live, alugh, love. Creating a Dream
Alphabetical Dreams 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseoh my gosh! amazing! i've always wondered wether it matters if your clock is fast or not when you make a wish on 11:11. wow, i really really really like this poem! it's so simple, yet so powerful. it paints such a clear image in my head. i understand your sentiments exactly!! can't wait to read more of your stuff... live, laugh, love. Creating a Dream
kelsi bones 2008-02-07 ch 12,	abuseI really like this. You and your full of emotion-ness. It makes for pretty poems =] The last full verse is my favorite. I know I always count the petals first too. k.X
painted.music 2008-02-05 ch 12,	abusekonban wa I like the second-to-last part where you say you counted the petals beforehand so that you'd know the outcome: "No, I won't take the risk." It was really cute. The rhyming added an innocent quality to it that I think went well with the "He loves me.../He loves me not." :) Cute poem. Ha det -Shan-
heresyisforlosers 2008-02-05 ch 12,	abuseviolets- one of my favorite poems by you s.t.
Nonya Soum 2008-02-02 ch 11,	abuseThank you for inserting originality and straying from the typical "you're my star..." format. Sweet poem. "And I know that when you finally Form a constellation with someone else… They’ll make up myths about you, babe, And everyone will know you as the hero That you’ve always been to me." So well written. It's classic and modern. My only suggestion would be switch the words 'never' and 'was'. Works anyway, but it's just a little thought. Great, well written poem! Write on!
kelsi bones 2008-02-02 ch 11,	abusethis is even more adorable than the last thing i reviewed ;] someday you won't have to be good at astronomy and you'll never be able to miss your perfect constellation just give yourself some time. i think it's interesting the way you you make him out to be some sort of hero, who you seem to think is... i'm not sure if this is exactly correct, but maybe too good for you? i don't know you, and i don't him, but i don't think anyone is "too good" for anyone else. anyway, you seem like a pretty spectacular to me. sorry for the awful long review. k.X
Michelladora Moon 2008-01-15 ch 1,	abusewow, that is really creative. but really sad too. good job :)

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