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| Tytherpol 2007-12-01 ch 1,  | abusegod this is perfect. holy wow. i was first impressed most with your rhythm and the way this piece accelerates and slows through your word choice. and the meanings in your line breaks are so awesome. the closure of this poem solidified the meaning of it oh! and the birds. omg how did you slip that in there. i adore the meanings of the birds for the cats and how you tie their thought back in to the 3rd stanza too. this is the best poem i have read in a very,very,very,very x10 long time. i hate giving just praise, but i can't think of anything i would change. |