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rosefaerie
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow.
That was really good. Great expression, lots of emotion packed in there. That's really true.
I liked the repetition of nearly the same question phrased differently. It drove the point home nicely.
Good job, keep writing!
Rosefaerie
Arafax
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseSorta depressing in one way, yet somewhat inspirational in another. Odd I know. -shrugs- Nice work though as usual.

~Arafax~
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