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| rosefaerie 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. That was really good. Great expression, lots of emotion packed in there. That's really true. I liked the repetition of nearly the same question phrased differently. It drove the point home nicely. Good job, keep writing! Rosefaerie |
| Arafax 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseSorta depressing in one way, yet somewhat inspirational in another. Odd I know. -shrugs- Nice work though as usual. ~Arafax~ |