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Reviews For: That Eternity in Two Weeks

simpleplan13
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseI like the whole animal thing... the repetition of forever and longlasting, etc. is great... I really love the last line
the Stranger in the moonlig...
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseTragic and wonderfully portrayed, this poem was really good writing. It had that mark of loneliness and wishes for it to fade that made it all the better.

~the Stranger in the moonlight
kloun doll
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseit's sad, really hurts...
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