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| simpleplan13 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI like the whole animal thing... the repetition of forever and longlasting, etc. is great... I really love the last line |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseTragic and wonderfully portrayed, this poem was really good writing. It had that mark of loneliness and wishes for it to fade that made it all the better. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| kloun doll 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseit's sad, really hurts... |