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Blissfully Sarcastic
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseWhoa. To be quite frank, I thought this poem was going to be a piece o'crap. (Yes, I do judge poems by their titles and books by covers, we all do, whether we admit to it or not.)
I was quite pleasantly surprised.
Very nice flow; you get your point across nicely without being TOO repetitive.
Very well done, I must admit. Bravo!
Dreaming Chica
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseyou have got some serious talent! i love how poetic this poem is! although it is alittle bit dark, it is very very well written!
Arafax
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseInteresting way to put it. I can relate to some degree. Good work.

~Arafax~
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