I love character development drabbles. I just do. They make me feel all happy inside.

You write very, very well. You have very good grammar, phrasing, your writing isn't too wordy, and you have a good sense of plot. I did see a few places where you could've used commas, but other than that, it's great.

I haven't read any of your other stories, but I hope they have some of these characters in them!

Sarcastic, bitter, rebelious...I like this kid. Ahh, if only real people were this cool. Good idea using the questionnaire, but I wonder what he's filling it out for, that would make a huge difference with the answers. Is that really the end of the questions? It's driving me insane that there isn't just one more. 99 is a good number to end, 98 isn't. Just a pet peeve, though. Good job!
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This could be developed into a swell (did I just say swell?) children's story. Dragons have always fascinated me. I especially like how she is trying to discern whether Seth is masculine or feminine. It takes away the human-thinking and adds to credibility. As a oneshot, I think this is actually the perfect length.
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Interesting idea, and points for originality. I'm not much into the good/evil, angel/devil scene, but it's intriguing enough. One grammar mistake I found: " Paragraph 2, line 2: "Aezirafel would saved them all, if she could." should be: "Aezirafel would have saved them all, if she could.". It would be fascinating to see the switch between being male and female, but for this being a oneshot type of thing, this is okay. Good job! I like these random characters.
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Ok, it's quite a good start, your descriptions were good but not too complicated. However I think you introduced the characters in a bit too fast. I also think the beginning of the plot was moving too fast. However it is a good start and I will read on to see how this continues.

Ooh. That was freakadelic. I'm really running out of ways to write reviews, but good job. I'd be very interested in reading more of this story, though, perhaps it is perfect just like this. Maybe there is (and I can't believe I'm saying this) too much randomness in it. I mean, they live in normal society but both main characters have extreme oddities about them. I think it might be a bit much for one story.
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