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| Shadows in the Fire 2007-12-01 ch 1,  | abuse*Stunned* That's so--so GOOD! -Amber |
| Tytherpol 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abusethe fact that you kept repeating 'sunshine' made the thoughts tie together and progress/flow well the "to tilt the world/into depression until" allusion and the blue jeans/pink ribbon contrast painted really strong, wonderful images nice work. |
| Dreaming Chica 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abusei love this poem! it is so poetic, and so well written! good job! |
| SilverTwilight 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written. It's so adorable. I think that's true about really good friends, too. |