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His Cuteness 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuseI like it...really its great sure the ending sucks but u could fix that problem with a sequel hint hint but its funny a bit confusing sure but hey i like it...please write a sequel!
blackbubbleblue 2008-03-25 ch 2,	abuseit really isn't that good. it's ok but you have improved a lot.
SirScott 2007-11-28 ch 2,	abuseThat's not too bad of a story. There wasn't too many people at the height of six foot back then. But, it would be sort of cool to go back into time. This chapter raises the question as to why Celeste sent her back through time. ~SirScott
SirScott 2007-11-28 ch 1,	abuseI like the mention of the pinball game. You don't as many people playing pinball. That was pretty to life where the manager gave the man the discount anyway. The squeaky wheel gets the grease. ~SirScott
VolleyballGurl212 2007-11-26 ch 9,	abusei thought this was amusing...i wish you ended better though. i know, i know, that's why you posted it. but i can still wish.
Jack Argyle 2007-11-25 ch 9,	abuseIt ends...there? Well, you did warn us I guess. There is no way you can leave it like that...is there? Surely you have some ideas for continuation existing on a discarded piece of A4 or something. Argh, never mind. It was good though. I laughed. I cried. I scrolled downwards. I hate you for the ending but I'm still laughing regardless. (I don't hate you by the way. The only thing I hate is racism and the Dutch)
Jack Argyle 2007-11-25 ch 8,	abuseNow THAT is a twist. And you said this story was terrible. Why must you lie you lying liar!? Stop lying! Honestly, that was a seriously cool twist. Love it.
Jack Argyle 2007-11-25 ch 7,	abuseGay, eh? I had my suspicions; the sewing sort of gave it away I think. hough didn't the word 'gay' just mean 'happy' back then? I dunno... I like how this story is progressing, and please take Landon to the future! It would be ever so much fun! Sorry if I sounded like young Sir Roderick there, but it would be great to see Landon prancing about in contemporary times. Actually, you might have sent him there already...guess I better get onto the next two chapters.
Twilight Starr 2007-11-25 ch 9,	abuseLol, she's in total freak out mode here at the beginning. Someone's coming through the wormhole? We don't know. That's no fun. I guess people will have to think of their own ending. ;) ~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-11-23 ch 8,	abuseOh, dear. I bet people are going to be surprised about what they find out in this chapter. I'm wondering what else would happen. Mt. Rushmore, huh? I wouldn't have thought of that. Great addition. ~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-11-23 ch 7,	abuseBlah, GrannyP. You keep claiming it gets worse. I don't see it happening. I actually like the story and look forward to more. Okay, technically I haven't finished re-reading the chapter, but I will in a few minutes and I'll enjoy it as much as the first time in spite of your "It gets worse" line. I still feel sorry for Landon. I mean he really doesn't need to get better. He was just born in the wrong time, etc. He could sew me a dress any time, but I don't wear dresses so that would be pointless. ;) The bra thing still makes me laugh and his embarassment is still hilarious. That author's note was an interesting tangent. Okay, so my actual review and not a ramble: "THIS STORY IS A MUST-READ!" Everyone better see that and read it to give you reviews so they can agree with me about the fact that it is good. ~Twilight Starr~
Jack Argyle 2007-11-21 ch 6,	abuseOh God, this just continues to get worse. And when I say 'worse' I mean 'better'. Why would I write 'worse' when in fact I meant its opposite, you ask? To tell you the honest truth...I have no idea. I guess I could delete what I just wrote and start over, but in my opinion backspace is the cowards way out. A true man never uses backspace. A true man's writing, by the time he's finished, should be so mistake-riddled that it gives you cancer. Okay, I apologise for the above. Your story deserves a better review than the incomprehensible drivel I've splurted out so far. So here it goes...much like a fine wine this story seems to have fermented over the five years in which it has sat dorment in your computer/desk/utility sack. Landon's a funny bugger, isn't he? I guess I shouldn't be complimenting him though, afterall he is a fictional character. The author who created him deserves all the appreciation. Okay, until next update, I bid thee farewell.
Twilight Starr 2007-11-21 ch 6,	abuseLol, all the things still made me laugh when I read them over a second time. I'm too lazy to re-mention them (or however you what to word it). Ah, poor Landon and confused Delilah. ~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-11-21 ch 5,	abuseI keep wondering who Landon is to Celeste. An ancestor, perhaps? "Landon was kind of cute, after all." I think he's adorable with all his insecurities and such. It's nice to find a fictional male character with faults. A hysterical guy at that time? That has to be a major embarassment. I bet his dad didn't like that. I haven't really gotten a read off of his dad. It would be too much for me, too. Looking forward to more. ;) ~Twilight Starr~
VolleyballGurl212 2007-11-21 ch 5,	abuseI still don't think this is bad. It definitely has potential... I want to know what happens next! ~Ana~

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