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| Venus Smurf1 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseI was grinning like an absolute moron through this entire thing. It was brilliant and entertaining and funny and fantastically written. You're truly amazing. |
| ChemicalxDisturbance 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseYou really gotta write more stories about katie and gavin! they are just so adorable together! XD |
| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseOh my god, I totally love all four of these! Very sweet and cute, and I love Katie (I empathize so much with her-- her personality, I mean), and Gavin's a sweetie. I hope you write more! |
| Random Word Artist 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseaw, that's adorable! gavin is so damn sweet! i loved the part where katie's, ah, "stuff" spills out. it was quite hilarious. just a thing: i noticed that in some paragraphs, there are two different people talking in the same paragraph. He sighs, sounding convincingly downtrodden, and says “That’s my idea of the perfect Thanksgiving, Katie.” “Too bad!” I chirp happily would be better if it was He sighs, sounding convincingly downtrodden, and says "That's my idea of a perfect Thanksgiving, Katie." "Too bad!" I chirp happily. but other than that, this was cute and hilarious. keep up the awesome work and write more katie/gavin oneshots! |
| una11 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseah, i loved this. I love fluff. really a nice one :) |
| Chels 2007-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, how cute~ They are just so frighteningly adorable, huh? |
| the wicked monkey 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI love this to it absolutly GREAT (i would have said ahmmazing, but I already said that in the other review) IT so CUTE but in a totally cool way and dom't steal Turkey-boy i copyrighted that Its the name of a guy in my school not at all hot but w/e he's still tukey-boy gavin can be chiken boy though or tuna-boy ... or he he can be the other turkey boy, because im coming up short for good names ah well not everybody can be genii -- the wicked monkey |
| Lily Llynn 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseAw so cute. I love Gavin and Katie, and both POVS are fantastic. (: This was hilarious, too, btw. (: Once again, super-glad somebody added this to the c2! (: |
| Noie 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThank you so much for writing a follow-up to Saving the Cheerleader. These characters are so cute and I would love to read more about them. Then it would be Gavin's turn to narrate and I adore listening to him rant; I think it's so funny when the male characters do that, especially when they're written as well as yours are! Please give us another one! |
| writingxonxwalls 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAw I loved it!! So amazing... Please write more about Gavin and Katie... they're so cute!! ''Brie |
| TwinkleHeart 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseaw! |