I like it. Please update soon. I want to know what happens!

Sweet! I can't review good but you only had one and It was coolio so I needed to!

I like the story. It's well written and interesting. Though I feel bad for the main character, the other people are so mean. I just hope her grandparents treat her better than the other people. But I have this uncanny feeling that in the second chapter someone's gonna destroy or ruin her dress and say that since she is a monster she is not allowed to have such nice things. Or someone might try to steal it or hurt her for having something so nice because they are jealous of it or something. Anyways, good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.