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| LW 2008-07-12 ch 2, anon. | abusei like the new story!! but, its a tad too confusing at times, update soon! |
| Miss Scene 2008-07-07 ch 2,  | abuseThough I hadn't read it 'before', I'm liking the re-edit. Kudos to you, nicely portrayed character. O_O Though I found it hilarious that Dillon's mom would think ambercrombie and jeans gangster. |
| Aqua Revolver 2008-07-07 ch 2, | abuseThis story needs... more chapter updates :D Can't wait for the rest! |
| Adanael 2008-04-07 ch 4, | abuseupdate soon. plus do me a favor, check your spelling, it's heard not herd |
| Guacamole 2008-02-23 ch 4, | abusesorry it took me a while to review but i'm hear now. wow this has been an interesting chapter as usual but who i wonder interevined...oh well i will see. update soon! |
| Riley Hunter 2008-02-23 ch 4, | abusei am dreadfully confuzzled. and is elli, lizzie? |
| CarnivalGirl346 2008-02-22 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. Love it a lot. Can't wait to c what happens. |
| L.W. 2008-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg helen. u are such a good writer! i hope u continue ur awsome writing in the future. i look forward to it! p.s. Vball rox! Bball Sux! go oakwood! |
| Guacamole 2008-02-02 ch 3, | abusehey i was planning to read this earlier but finally got the chance to. this is pretty interesting so far and i like Lizzy's character so update soon! |
| CarnivalGirl346 2008-01-28 ch 3, | abuseFinally! JK! I know who it is. HA HA HA HA HA! Great chapter I reconazie a fimalar name in here. So you waont have another poetry project in your way will you? Cause thats like killing someone if you make them wait that long to read anothe rwonderful chapter. -Blondie |
| Riley Hunter 2008-01-28 ch 3, | abuseit was god. but it was a tad confusing at the end. that's all. so, update when you can, chica! |
| adanael 2008-01-22 ch 2, anon. | abusewhat is with the motorcycle? |
| mistress tee 2008-01-15 ch 2, | abuseok so... this is really good. haha I'm waiting for more! where's chapter 3!? |
| Brittney 2008-01-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow. That story was really good. I really cant wait for the third chapter. |
| CarnivalGirl346 2007-12-16 ch 2, | abuseA little confusing in the beginning but i got over it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And you grounded no way no how. |