i like the new story!! but, its a tad too confusing at times,
update soon!

Though I hadn't read it 'before', I'm liking the re-edit. Kudos to you, nicely portrayed character. O_O Though I found it hilarious that Dillon's mom would think ambercrombie and jeans gangster.

This story needs... more chapter updates :D

Can't wait for the rest!

update soon. plus do me a favor, check your spelling, it's heard not herd

sorry it took me a while to review but i'm hear now. wow this has been an interesting chapter as usual but who i wonder interevined...oh well i will see. update soon!

i am dreadfully confuzzled. and is elli, lizzie?

Great chapter. Love it a lot. Can't wait to c what happens.

omg helen. u are such a good writer! i hope u continue ur awsome writing in the future. i look forward to it! p.s. Vball rox! Bball Sux! go oakwood!

hey i was planning to read this earlier but finally got the chance to. this is pretty interesting so far and i like Lizzy's character so update soon!

Finally! JK! I know who it is. HA HA HA HA HA! Great chapter I reconazie a fimalar name in here. So you waont have another poetry project in your way will you? Cause thats like killing someone if you make them wait that long to read anothe rwonderful chapter.
-Blondie

it was god. but it was a tad confusing at the end. that's all. so, update when you can, chica!

what is with the motorcycle?

ok so... this is really good. haha I'm waiting for more! where's chapter 3!?

Wow. That story was really good. I really cant wait for the third chapter.

A little confusing in the beginning but i got over it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. And you grounded no way no how.