Very nice! It has a strong message of hope and love. :)
--Katrina Zeffirelli

I like this.. it's so sweet and very true for most people and it is definitely something most people can relate to

I didn't really like the second to last stanza though.. the word accomplishment seemed like an odd choice to me.. in both the length of it and just the meaning of the poem... but that might just be me

PS If you're bored today check out the Review Game's Review Marathon.. there's a link in my profile

GREAT Job. I really like it. The style and rythm and all was great.
Mandi~4~life
Loversdream17

Aww, Jazzy... that was so sweet! I loved it! Great job! I don't know what else to say...

It was a great pick-me-up from the conversation we just had.

Love you!

♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥