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| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseGreat job- love the lines, "You could be, the key we need". --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| keywordparamore 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abusei like this a lot! i have a similar message in "Creation" but yours is more to the point than mine. this is amazing... i cant really use any other words, but i have been using Will Ferrell's "Scrumtrillescent" so yes, this is scrumtrillescent! this is a great line: True potential you’ll show When your life unfolds |
| Michael Kim 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseuniversal theme personally developed ...always good : ) well, good most of the time good work |
| VegasGoddess 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful, girl! I'm kinda speechless right now... I just... wow. Amazing. Absolutely gorgeous. LOVED it! Great job. ♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥ |
| theatrical rhapsodies 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseHmm. This poem does't seem to be lacking, I think you got across exactally what you wanted, not trying to show off or anything by throwing all sorts of nifty tricks in there. It was very symple, in a good way though, I liked it. Well done. -theatrical rhapsodies |