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Katrina Zeffirelli
2008-02-08
ch 1,
abuseGreat job- love the lines, "You could be, the key we need".
--Katrina Zeffirelli
keywordparamore
2007-12-29
ch 1,
abusei like this a lot! i have a similar message in "Creation" but yours is more to the point than mine.

this is amazing... i cant really use any other words, but i have been using Will Ferrell's "Scrumtrillescent" so yes, this is scrumtrillescent!

this is a great line:

True potential you’ll show
When your life unfolds
Michael Kim
2007-11-19
ch 1,
abuseuniversal theme personally developed
...always good : )

well, good most of the time

good work
VegasGoddess
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautiful, girl! I'm kinda speechless right now... I just... wow.

Amazing. Absolutely gorgeous. LOVED it! Great job.

♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥
theatrical rhapsodies
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abuseHmm. This poem does't seem to be lacking, I think you got across exactally what you wanted, not trying to show off or anything by throwing all sorts of nifty tricks in there. It was very symple, in a good way though, I liked it. Well done.

-theatrical rhapsodies
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