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| sweets555 2008-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseRight now I'm avoiding asking that question, so I'm totally feeling this poem. Great job!! |
| Katrina Zeffirelli 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazing! I know exactly how you feel (if this is based on your life)- I'm going through something like that right now. Very nice phrasing and word use. The rhythm is a little shaky, but it doesn't take away from the poem at all. --Katrina Zeffirelli |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThat's really good.. for some reason the insecurity at the end really appeals to me... I love your last stanza!! ~Daughter of Music |
| girl-behind-the-book 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseOhh I like it! I love the structure. it flows so well. It's not a solid rhyme scheme, and yet it still flows. That's brilliant :) may I ask what the question is? as always, girl behind the book/kris |
| Michael Kim 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuse"you want fries with that?" : the one question? :P:P just joking!! it IS one of your better poems, i agree (though i haven't read other works) your emotion is well refined, its not just raw feelings keep at it |
| VegasGoddess 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAck! This was really good! I can't beleive how good a poetry writer you are! It's so amazing! This was, by far, my favorite of yours. It's just really good! Heartbreakingly sad... but beautiful. Excellent job!! =) ♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥ |