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| girl-behind-the-book 2008-01-06 ch 1,  | abuseAw that's so sad!! I feel your pain though. I've lost many a best friend. kk, so even though you have alot of lil technicallities (sp??), it's still an amazing poem. I love love love the line "The hurt deeper than the ocean" ahg!! I love it! |
| Michael Kim 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseeh.. it sounds oppressed by the poetic devices requirements lol write a second version of it, one not bound by any rules!! :) |
| WhisperingBells1959 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseReally good- and sad. |
| VegasGoddess 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThanks for making me cry. This is SO sad. I need a hug now... and you can't give me a real one! *sniffs* Beautiful, as always, though. Definitely another favorite. But, I only have one request. No more sad ones, okay? LOVE you, so much! ♥~Grissom's Sweetheart~♥ |