Very interesting. You conveyed a lot in so few words.

[The blissful world of curved green/fades into throbbing black.] Beautiful description, and also an interesting start with the contrast.

[Two hands on a face/Two heads in your hands,] I particularly liked these lines. The near repitition in the sounds was used well and a lot of emotion is conveyed through the actions.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

I really enjoyed this. The images in this are vivid and the thoughts are interesting. I was captivated. Keep up the good work!