Aww... I feel bad for the guy... person. He should feel guilty. I'm rooting for both of them. Sort of. I have no clue. I'm speechless again. This is so good!

The hopelessness and bitterness and hunhapy feelings you described in this poem was really well-put down. It was easy to understand how it feels, and how you felt like you couldn't leave this person.
This was a sad poem, although it was really hard to take in at some point because of the sadness. I hope you're alright. If you wanna talk, you'll know where to find me.
The Reverse Edge Blade

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Aw, for me? Thanks! :D

Favorite couple of lines: "We're almost out of sugar. Why you keep eating it, I don't know. You're still as sour as ever."

-and-

"I try to ignore you like you do me, but there's no point in giving you the silent treatment; You always manage to out-silence me."

I love how you wrote this (and the other as well) in poetic format -- but full sentence. What's that called again? Prose or something? I think that's it. *shrug*

Normally I don't like prose, but I loved both of your pieces. They're two parts to one package. Excellent. Kudos. Loved it!

Zaijen
-Shan-