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Squidy
2007-12-05
ch 1,
Dude. You like to repeat things, don't you? It definitely works, though. I like the...sort of alliteration...? Like "I hate to hurt you, it hurts me." Sort of alliteration. Lots of H's. :D
LoSt ReMeDy
2007-11-20
ch 1,
Hi
What can I say this poem is GREAT! I love it really!
So keep smiling LoSt ReMeDy
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