Reviews for Goddess Parodies - FictionPress.com

Namahagetecno 2008-07-27 ch 1,	abuseThis was really awesome. I love what you've done with your own story.
Amethyst Asheryn 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseReview game: (Easy fix) Overall, I think it was an interesting idea. Not many authors can make fun of their own stories, so congrats on that. I know that the odd language and whatnot was supposed to add humor to the story, but for me, it kind of detracted. Going from plain old regular English to ... what, ghetto slang or something? jolted me a little. It was like, "Oh, this is amusing..." to "what the heck? Hang on..." If you know what I mean. Disorienting, like it interrupted things or something. I also think that maybe if you slipped in some more subtle humor along with the stuff you've got now, it would really add to the story. I adore the humor in it right now, but along with some more subtle stuff as well, you could probably have readers rolling. :) Also, you keep putting commas in the wrong places. Ex: "At Kevins house," should be: "At Kevins house." and "My boss, should be "My boss." Unless you were trying to do that on purpose? Other than that...interesting idea. Ashe
fatbird33 2008-02-22 ch 1,	abuseHA!
truthordeal 2007-12-04 ch 1,	abuseIt takes a lot of character to poke fun at yourself, thats for sure. Also, this parody makes me totally want to go read Goddess now. Oh yea, and grammar, and word usage, and spelling, blah blah blah.
Oracle of Destiny 2007-11-23 ch 1,	abuseLMAO Very, very funny xD!