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| SummerBaby94 2008-06-07 ch 11, | abuseAW! I missed Brian and Tandy! Tandy's mom's story about when she fell in love was really adorable too. P.S. I got the Twilight series too! They are freaking amazing. :) I can't wait for the movie. |
| Kohlomere 2008-06-02 ch 11, | abuseHey! I love this story. I find the teacher/student cliche a little creepy but that's probably because of an unresolved crush on an English teacher last year. Brian is a gem--I'm not so sure about Mark but he's interesting. Anyway, keep writing! E. |
| duckliy543 2008-06-02 ch 11, | abusei just about had the worst day ever,this sophomre end of the year finals are kicking mybutt! but then i saw this and it instatnly got so much better, congrats on being a junior! only two more years then grad! so anway i really loved this chapter, you seem to put alotof work into it so amazing job! |
| Stoked Is Rad 2008-06-02 ch 11, | abuseJULIE! MI AMIGA! Haha. Definitely been awhile. It's sad that we barely talk anymore, and that we both barely update anymore. But to let you in on a not-so-secret secret: I think I might devote an entire month to finishing Count and Cliche. Wouldn't that be grand? I missed this story. It's nice to see it continue. But you suck, because I have two more days of school left. Granted, I get out at 1:30 both days, and all my hard finals are done with, but it's the principal of the matter. I'd usually be out two weeks ago, but they want us to go back after Labor Day so they can save money on AC. Cheap! Anyway, it's nice to see you update. And you're a JUNIOR! Ah, Upperclassman! Haha. I'll just be a lowly little sophomore. :( Haha. Natalie. |
| shy green rock 2008-06-02 ch 11, | abuseYAY you finally reviewed. It was odd cus I was lookig at my story alert list and I saw CTTFG and I thought,"when is she going to post up a new chapter". And it happened!! WOOHOO! It was a tad short, but nonetheless good. Her mom's story made me think of Brian and Tandy's little food fight. They are so cute together. They're comfortable around each other which is what is truly important. Update soon, please! |
| xoxhp 2008-06-02 ch 11, anon. | abusefinaly! an update! haha. nice chapter =) update soon please. |
| Jevanminx 2008-06-02 ch 11, | abuseHAHAHAHAHA gotta love Brian, and Tandy so great. JM |
| Veronica Kimble 2008-06-02 ch 11, | abuseawesome chapter as usual. i loved the scene at the pizza place. i wonder what brian's gonna do to make tandy pay. update soon! x |
| The Latest Plague 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseokay... i like where your taking this story. the cliches of all cliches all in one. but, i have some criticism, i'm afraid. I'll start with Tandy and Brian's relationship. okay, you kept saying they were best friends... but that she hated his guts. that doesnt even make sense. then you elaborated some more on their friendship, but that didnt help your case at all. if it werent for Michael, you guys would be enemies? that's not a best friend, that's a best friend's friend that you happen to not like. i also thought it was wierd how Tandy had to meet stephanie in Mr. Reynolds class just to not to grab attention. Maybe at your school they dont do that, but at mine, we dont make a big deal. i've talked to many male teachers alone in a classroom, and have even (shock! gasp!) left the class ALONE! i know, scandal! (i'm calling the plan paranoid) i also found it hypocritical for her to flip off the guys staring at her hugging a friend, but then calling brian immature for doing just that that when she insulted him. and than she admitts to "sounding like a three year old" when she refused to apologize. really now. i know that every story has its mistakes, but my advice is to get someone to read this over, edit it, and tell you what needs to be revised. i want to read the rest... and i will (i just have to go to school first, and then i'll come back. lol (:) I'm sorry if i sounded harsh, and i'm far from perfect, but i think its definately something to fix if you are ever, in the future, going to revise this. |
| Deenu12 2008-06-02 ch 11, anon. | abuseOMG i got so excited that you updated! (and yeah i understand what you mean by school. I still have two more weeks!) Anyways i love Tandy and Brian! Cant't wait to read more |
| QuasiHere 2008-04-24 ch 10, | abuseYour characters are hilarious, keep 'em comin'! |
| shy green rock 2008-04-04 ch 10, | abusehaha love it! |
| nadia_rakiN@yahoo.com 2008-03-08 ch 10, anon. | abusei really like this story :] whens the next chapter coming out? |
| hpp3 2008-03-06 ch 10, anon. | abusereall good story, whens the next chapter coming out? |
| Veronica Kimble 2008-03-05 ch 10, | abuseoh wow. a super romantic moment between them. yay! totaly cant wait for the next chapter! x |