I really like this one. I like the unusual formatting, it's unique and creative - which is a good thing. Too much poetry on this site ends up sounding repetitive.

This is really good. Lots of emotion

i wish i could say i understood but i dont.

i wish i knew what to say but i dont.

i wish i was a better friend but im not.

so i'll just hug you and hope that it makes you feel the slightest bit better than you do.

you make me so sad sometimes stix.

-pockets

boys are stupid.

I really liked this. The itallics gave emphasis, even if that wasn't intended.

I'll agree that the formatting is a bit much,but only a bit. Otherwise,I found this to be a fresh and enjoyable piece. Good job.

I am a fan of what some people call “formatting” but I do think it needs purpose and moderation. There were some instances in this piece where I thought your formatting did lend itself to the poem, but mostly I found it distracting and overdone.

I do think that this was well written though; your message comes across strongly enough to knock the breath out of a reader. I think this piece stands on its own—- and might actually be more powerful in a less adorned form.

Keep up the good work.