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| bittersweetxxx 2008-03-08 ch 1,  | abusesoo true and justice prevails...feel bad for the baby tho XD..nice and funny and i love the evilness in the end |
| Adenil 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseWell, I feel good for the lady, but bad for the baby. She should have stabbed the guy in the face! Stabbing fixes everything, you know. |
| Sixkiller 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseWhoa ~ another great story! I love the bitter narration and the last line was just awesome! |
| Faceless Pyrus 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was very powerful! The last line is pretty killer, and I like how all the tension and exposition really culminates in the final sentiment. Great job! |
| Thane of Eternity 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseI like the pure honesty and, in the end, ironic humor. The strong woman really shines through in that last line. What a great last line. |