hey just askn wat does "Lux Perpetua Luceat"means, sounds like ohlala kind thing! hehe

HOLY COW so much goin on! hehe so much to say here but i rather just say UPDATE SOON! hell idk wats gunna happen next :D

awh hah hey i love this chapter NO MORE EDDITING heheh! kay from the last 8 chapters im complety head over heels for this story hehe im so cheezy anyways im lovn it! and the whole scuckn wrist does sounds cute lol

o, loved this chapter haha excepcialy meeting the familia. hehe

hah. the story gets better and better :)

oh im hooked already! lovn it :)

Love it! Just added to my favs.

Love it! Can't wait for more!

this is good def. continue it!

Please don't kill yourself. Fluff is good. You can't havae angry and deppressing scenes all the time. You wrote a wonderful chapter. So hurry up and get the next one out.

So far your story is good. I just had to say that Jesus' last name wasn't "Christ." That's a Greek honorarium meaning messiah or savior. Probably Sarah wouldn't be given the same honorarium. Maybe she would, I'm not sure where this story is going. She would probably be Sarah daughter of Jesus, though. Just feel like it would help Cain's whole issue with the Catholic Church. ~jlr

Hey! Congratulations on your TiRO nomination!

I just wanted to let you know that I read this story! Unfortunately, I'm not giving you anything else except that because I want to remain completely neutral in this "review" that isn't actually a review proper.

I'm judging Best Drama/Angst for the TiRO awards this round, and your story has now been read as part of my duties as the judge. Winners won't be announced until January or whatever, so hang tight.

I feel both really sad for both Cain and Lilith. He obviously has been through alot, but I mean seriously he needs to chnage his approach. Sexual prowess can only get you so far with someone, and I have a feeling Cain wants to the sexual connection because he can't have the emotional one. Hope fully LIlith will regain some spark, but I do empathize with her. She has no options to her, trapped and afraid with one man behind her who is controlling and manipulative and entirely selfish at this point.

I would be so mad at Cain for that. I hope she gets him back for that, or at least makes him realize that he hurt her...

It was good to see Lilith and Cain a little more subdued at the end. Sounds like Cain nearly got chopped in half. Yikes, that would sting.