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| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseWow, all your poems are so sad-- I know, duh, really deep interpretation, girl. Sorry-- they're just really poignant. But I think this is my favorite. Some of the others, though they have nice images and some nice lines, seem like you were really emtional when you wrote them and maybe could've edited one more time. But this one is just cynical and... I don't know. I like it, though. |
| J.W. Hargrove-MystMan 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseIt kinda confused me... Was the narrator pushing him away, then pulling him/her near? I did like it, though... |