Just finished chapter 1 and I'm hooked. Thanks for writing this :)

awesome!

it's been 4 years since the last update...and as unlikely as it is that you'll continue...please if you have the time or interest...please continue D:
Really really reaaaaally love this story

MWAHAHAHAHAHA! Okay, so hot guy isn't used to this skinny kid who covers bruised walking away from him, and sadi skinny pile of bones isn't used to anyone caring. Okay. I LOVE IT so far! I looked, and saw that it hasn't been updated since 2008! Fuck The What, Man! .WHAT.

It seems as though you haven't updated in a while, but I'll put my faith in you regardless and Alert your story. It's fucking brilliant, you do realize that don't you? I just want to ravish all the characters in this lovely little story you have set out for us :D

OH MY GOSH I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! :D You are so amazing at writing! Rayne is so sweet and I just love Aedan. I'm so intrigued to know what's up with Keane!

You're writing style is amazing, you've written this absolutely beautifully! Please update soon! :D

I think Rayne is one of the most hilarious characters I've ever come across. I mean, his reactions are sometimes so bizarre (for example, his reaction to the kiss on his cheek) that I can only scratch my head in confusion.

And he was so shocked when he found out Aedan was gay. Seriously, is he that dense?

Great story! I just hope you didn't abandon it because I'm really curious about what happens next.

"It's either Lovepeace or Jeremy" I say with confidence, and just a tiney weeny bit of doubt. (Sable?)

Mm I was sort of disappointed with the lack of Rayne/Winter action but since this isn't one of those stories that's completely lost without the main characters being all over each other I got over it pretty quickly.

Seimi was so in love with Ritsuka. XD and I know I should say somthing about the chapter or whatever... But... That's really all I have at the moment. This story makes me giggle.

Enough said.

How you manage to make that fact that Rayne likes Winter perfectly obvious from a 1st person pov, yet still have him blissfully unaware is beyond me. You get cookies for this one.

Is it too early to say I love you?

I am having my mind blown, repetitively and without mercy, by the background you so skillfully painted with your alliterations. So, yes, I will most likely my math final tomorrow because I will stay up all night reading this, but I can say with confidence that it will be worth it. Keep up the good work ;)

Nooooooooooo! It can't just be left here, it needs to be finished! I think I might die if it isn't...well maybe I'm over-reacting, but I'll still be really sad and empty if I don't get to know the end :p

BABY COME BACK!

I promised I wouldn't review until the end but

*VERY RELIEVED SIGH*

All of my hate/frustration has disintegrated with rayne eith those last words XD

...for now ;)

ohmygod i LUV this story pleazz i definetely need more

hope things work out for keane i happen to like him a lot (like your author's comments by the way) 3