Daisuke. Thats my guess. Lol love the story

OK, I don't usually review (I know, I'm a terrible reader), but dammit, you've guilted me into it. I really like this story, and I adore the relationship between Aedan and Rayne. I love how strong Rayne seemed in the beginning and the way it became clear throughout the story that he's in fact a very frightened little boy. I'm glad this piece brought in the four levels of high school popularity; most high school stories describe the social hierarchy in two terms (popular/preppy vs unpopular/nerds), and that's just not true in my experience. I'm glad we've gotten to see a bit more about Aedan's character through his friends (who I think were brilliantly crafted), but I'd really like to see a side story in Aedan's point of view from before he and Rayne started actually interacting.

Oh, and this is probably really wrong, but I kinda think Keane's in love with Daisuke. Anyway, this is a fabulous story and I can't wait to see what happens next!

I'm going to say Rayne because you threatened to open our heads and lobotomize us if we guessed him. So there's a higher percentage of chance that it's him, because otherwise you wouldn't need to threaten, yeah?

Okaay, no, I'm kidding. I'm thinking it's either Daisuke or Aedan. ...I'm going with Aedan.

So um. Yeah.
I kind of want to tie Rayne to my bed and ravish him. Aedan is a lucky lucky thing m I would so like to be him. Though that wouldn't probably be good for Rayne or Aedan. (He wouldn't be able to walk properly and theen Yoko might have to make good on that brass doorknob threat.)

Looking forward to whatever comes next~

meh, too lazy to log on, but my opinion must be heard!!

i am already loving this story. like, whoa. the two main characters are just adorable and Aidan is HOT HOT HOT like a tamale! :DD

Hm, who Keane is in love with. I'm going to say either Sable or LP. I'm guessing Sable because anyone would be moody if they were in love with Sable cuz he's kind of a whory-** ;) and I don't really have a logical reason for LP, I just think he needs some love!

OMG. I thinki just found my favorite FP author! I love this story!

Spotted a typo.

“Right peeps, let’s get going!” (Daisuke) called cheerfully, still dragging (Daisuke) along by the wrist. We all got up, wiping our coats and trousers, and then crowded into the station, queuing up at the cashier to get tickets.

anyways, it took me 2 days to finish reading this ^^; I love the story so far! Aedens awesome and Rayne-chan honou ni kawaii desuyo!

Ano ne, Is Kae-chan in love with Sable? I'm guessing Sable.. or maybe LP Or Lolita ^^;

loved the story it was so cute. The characters were so adorable!

AH! Why?? WHy do all the awesome slash stories never get updated? >.> UPDATE. NOWZ. I'll give you a hammer to destroy your writers block!? and a cookie. :) plez?!

ahh i found ya ! finaly.. didnt know you had an account on Fictionpress... and that made me miss loads of chapters of this wonderful story o.O
i totally love it! rayne stays cute as ever :P. hmm i think Keane is in love with Aedan.. but maybe thats just my incest infected mind..(but still that would bring some nice angst in the story)

btw you should update bubbles.. i'm starting to miss it.. and you stopped at such a terrible point.. how could you...

I simply love the way you've intorduced your charcter in this first chapter! The tone of your writing is so clear and unique to the charcter you're trying to create, and already Rayne feels quite real an believable to me. His perspective of things, highschool, is extremely original and so, basically, a lovely opening chapter.

Please say he's in love with is brother >.

Just read the whole story in less than 24 hours and ... I liked it. Obviously, I guess, or I wouldn't have bothered to finish it. I was really expecting an ending, especially since it has been a while since you updated. I am really excited to see what it going to happen next, apparently this is just the calm before the storm stage.
I like your writing, I have really enjoyed all of your stories that I have read.

I love this page. It's hardbreakingly beautiful like a picture, a single moment captured and stored forever in my heart. And also on the internet.

I forgot how much I loved this...