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Qui 2008-07-23 ch 18,	abuseThis was...remarkably good. Was that the end or is there more?
niri 2008-07-21 ch 18,	abuseIt feels like its almost over. Or at least I hope that it ends here. Not because I want it to end, but because I don't want any more bad things to happen to Rayne. I just want him to get his happily ever after. Your characters are amazingly interested and detailed. I both like it and hate it that you spend so much time on clothing. Hate it because most of the time its irrelevant, but love it because its still nice to imagine all that detail. Your descriptions are good for artists who want to try drawing the characters. Aedan sounds perfect. He's my dream man. Too bad he's gay.
silenceliesforever 2008-07-16 ch 18, anon.	abuseOh my wicked darling goodness! This is one of the best stories I've read since...forever! You must write more. It's so suspenseful that I can't stop reading...and now you've stopped. AH Please, please, please write the next chapter!! throws fluffy pillows at you I won't stop throwing them at you until the next chapter is up. smiles Love Winter Storms. Ta ta for now hehehe Love, silenceliesforever
Keely 2008-07-03 ch 18, anon.	abuseWow. I love all of your stories but this one is no doubt my favorite. Your characters seem so real and quirky and relatable especially Chiyoko, she's absolutley adorable. Update as soon as you can because I can't wait to read more!
CrayonMentality 2008-06-30 ch 11,	abuseRayne...can...sing? WTF?!?!?! LOL, love this chapter.
Capricia 2008-06-30 ch 4,	abuselove the lolita! can't wait for more of rayne and aedan
TenshiGosuperu 2008-06-29 ch 18,	abuseI lurve chu! :D Rayne is the cutest character I've ever read about and Aedan's pretty awesome too. I also love all of your other characters because you characterized them so well! Your crazy Author Notes also rock my socks. ^^ I just love your writing style, your way with words is amazing. You make everything so visual so I can just picture it in my head easily and I just...love you? Yes, I definitely love you! And to culminate my love for you--you must update immediately and I shall promise to review forever more!
Faith Adeline 2008-06-22 ch 18,	abuseSo, I like this story. It's cute :) But, some things don't quite add up. I mean, he was just able to disappear for 3 weeks? Isn't that a bit strange? Didn't the mom send the police out, and what about school? Missing 3 weeks would set you back so far, you'd have to probably graduate later. Just things like that irk me. And, thank goodness you changed it, " " is used for diologue. ' ' is normally only used for quotes that are inside of diologue. Like this: "You say I'm a 'stealing your heart' but isn't it you who stole mine?" I dunno, that's just a random sentence lol. And definitely proof read, just so you can get rid of those nasty little errors (this mostly pretains to the beginning chapters) Anyway, keep it up and update soon. Faith
Bloodfeeder94 2008-06-19 ch 2,	abuseI was doing a major organization of my favorites, when I saw your story on it. Then I got this craving to read it again, so here I am! It's way better, the second time aroun!
Thread of Life 2008-06-17 ch 18,	abuseHm, I guess I didn't review this chapter... actually I don't think I have reviewed any of the chapters since I found it late but I have to say it's fantastic. Great job! Right now your review count is 299, so maybe this one will bumb it up to 300? :)
Amindaya 2008-06-16 ch 15,	abuseHm, there's only one thing I could have thought of to constructively criticize, and it's improved a lot since the first chapter so I don't think it really applies anymore. You do describe a LOT, but that's fine. Description is good. But not when it's grouped into a HUGE paragraph. That was the only bad/boring part I could find: the huge block paragraphs. Once you started to split things up more, it made it easier to follow.
Amindaya 2008-06-16 ch 14,	abuseI found that part with the kiss. It's in chapter THREE: "I raised my head, my eyes not quite meeting his but focusing on some point over his shoulder. ‘I’ve got a lesson,’ I answered. He sighed again and then dipped towards me, dropping on my cheek a rapid kiss that felt all at once soft and insistent and sweet and nice and tickly. ‘I’ll see you at lunch.’ And then he walked away. In a daze, astonished, unable to know what to think, horrified and strangely thrilled, I made my way to my lesson." So yeah. Wowowowo! Aedan's fed up, I guess? Three cheers, dude! I hope Rayne doesn't freak again, though.
Amindaya 2008-06-16 ch 13,	abuseBut, but, but this isn't the first time Aeden has kissed him on the cheek! He did it only a few chapters after they first kissed each other. Why is he only freaking out about it now? He must love him. And that's why he doesn't mind when Daisuke kisses him. :)
Amindaya 2008-06-16 ch 12,	abuseGeez? His mother DID know after all? That...sucks. She's a bad mother. I don't understand this.
Amindaya 2008-06-16 ch 11,	abuseWe all know that crazy friends and group sing-alongs rock the collective socks of everyone on the planet. It's fact.

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