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dominic+leo
2008-05-13
ch 1,
abusebefore i even read this i wanted to say that it looks interesting and don't worry, people don't review my stories either. even though i've been working on it for 3 YEARS! oh well, it is a part of the job.^-^

-Dommy
Domini-kun
2008-05-04
ch 6,
abuseHOW CAN YOU SAY THIS CHAPTER IS BORING?! IT'S THE BEST THING I EVER READ! Why can't my family be like that? I like Tom. She rocks XXD! Did you know my nickname at school is Gary? I know, awesome, right? I LOVE IT! XD! GO GARY! AND FREAK-OF-SPADE ROCKS MY WORLD TO BITS!! XD!!
insanityxspeaks
2008-04-26
ch 18,
abuseSo, I just read this entire fic, all in like 2 hours because I simply could not force myself to tear my eyes away from the ridiculously captivating screen. This. Is. Magical. Holy kjhfkashdlfa. I love it. I love Rayne (gahh! he's so cute) and Aedan and all your sweet little characters. I love the plotline, I love everything. You, my dear, are an amazing writer and if you do not update this I will personally hunt you down and put your fingers to the keys. Now I'm off to see if there's anything else you've written, 'cause...wow. WOW.
Rayne
2008-04-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseGod that was cute =D
Domini-kun
2008-04-15
ch 5,
abuseWow. Does h not understand that Rayne DOESN'T LIKE HIM? He said it himself, and yet... He keeps bugging him. I like his perseverance. I admire it even! GO AEDAN!
Catseye*Rose
2008-04-13
ch 18,
abuseRayne is that special kind of oblivious that makes me wonder how he hasn't been kidnapped by now. Ah, but he's cute, so it's okay. Alright, I love Sable. He really does seem like Ayame...heh. Is it just me or does Aedan seem somewhat unstable? I kinda keep expecting him to randomly attack Rayne... Ah, this is such a cute story! Can't wait for more! XD (Oh, I'm learning Japanese, too! XD It's fun ^^)
ItalianQT
2008-04-10
ch 18,
abuseGood story so far. Rayne is so naive probably from being so antisocial his whole life. Update soon! I can't wait for everybody to finally see them together! :-)
Yumiko Shima
2008-04-10
ch 18,
abuseIt took a LOT of self-control not to be in hysterics when Rayne asked Aedan if he was gay. I had to practically suffocate myself to avoid waking everyone up. But his little explanation was SO SWEET. I want to glomp them both. And maybe even shave Sable's head for interrupting them. You do not interrupt yaoi time! -throws high-heeled shoe at him-
Clearly, Aedan is a good kisser. Oh, lala... XD Rayne's adorable when he's all clueless.
Wait, I wonder if Syl and Aedan would get along? It seems to me they'd hate each other. If these are published, expect crossover fanfics. XD (Heck, I'd buy them!!)
...It's depressing that I can't always read your stories as soon as I get the alert. But I still can't wait for an update! On this and Bubbles! And I'll have to finish reading the other stories later...
Carnivale
2008-04-09
ch 18,
abuseI haven't reviewed this yet... but I effing LOVE it :D
It's wonderful and lovely and lots of other descriptive words. Love. It.
And I'm so glad Aedan and Rayne finally made out xD They're hey-la cute.
This is brilliance. Not much else to say.
zomfgzitseffay
2008-04-09
ch 18,
abuseShort review because really, what else can I say that hasn't been said already?
I love this story.
I heart the characters.
I
Domini-kun
2008-04-08
ch 4,
abuseDo you have any idea how funny your author's notes are? I LOVE THEM! XD!
Blaze Moonlight
2008-04-08
ch 18,
abuseOH MY GOD! THIS IS SO AWESOME! Seriously this is an amazing story - definitely one of the best things I've ever read. All of your characters are SO brilliant especially Rayne. (The thing where he gets that random song in his head reminds me of myself, I was doing an arial ropewalk and I was so scared and the I got a random Story of the Year song in my head and I was less scared after that because I was too busy trying to remember the words.) I love Aedan's friends and family as well - they're so random and cool!
erasmuss
2008-04-08
ch 18,
abuseOh b-rilliant m'darling.
It has been awhile since youve updated this hasnt it? Well done. I like this very much, and this really does show how ignorant little Rayne is. He didnt know Aedan was gey? I completly guwaufedfed at that. Oh, this story makes me feel an interesting mix of happyness, annoyance and somehting sort of like anticipation. Very nice, smoth kiss scene thing. It wasnt awkward like some wiring, and cute, though the ending was a little spacey for me.
I'm still trying to work on a picture of Rayne, but everytime I try I end up drawing a woman, which is obviously not the aim. DX
I dont like panic at the disco...
Anyway.
Lovelove.
Erasmuss.
centenarian
2008-04-06
ch 18,
abuseOkay...okay...seriously...Rayne didn't know that Aedan was gay!? Stop, just stop right there. I was laughing so hard, I swear. Guffawing, giggling and screaming in laughter. Like Sable. I can't believe that Rayne is so...uh... never mind, i might offend you.
Don't worry, though, I still love that little doll-boy. Too cute not to. Well, at least he's saying to himself at least that he loves Aedan. That's an improvement right? Yey!
Well, this is a good chapter but I seriously want more. Please? Longer chapters at least. I will go mad if you don't update soon. It will be all your fault that I'll get shipped to a mental ward. Do they allow you to use internet there? So at least even if I'm stuck there, I can still read fictionpress. MUHahahaha! But no, i don't think there will be internet there. I'll die, commit suicide. So...there is only one solution... update soon!
Midnights Scream
2008-04-05
ch 18,
abuseit's so sweet and I love how Rayne explained how he felt about Aedan. :) so cute. Sable makes me laugh though and i like him even though he's an **. :) go you!
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