This was good. It did not lag in plot and it made me want to read it to find out what was going to happen:)

hehe. Sounded fun too.

spoiled much? And what about her protector guy? I feel bad she doesn't even try to talk to him.

no daddy to his face, ha?

hehe. She probably smells like smoke now. *giggle*

Skitzogemini! I love you so much! You're like one of my favourite authors! I used to follow you on quizilla and then it revamped itself into the horror it is now, and I left. I never got to finish some of the stories I started there but I'm so ecstatic that you're here. You are an amazing author and your books are wonderful. Are you going to put up that one shot you had of War and that big contest whatever it was? I can't remember but please please post it up. I love everything you write. Never stop writing!

Honestly. I thought it was a crack fic. I was positive it was a crack fic. lmao and I totally loved it. It was hilarious and it kept my attention.

That. Was. So. Freaking. AWESOME! I can't wait for the rest of her story!

OMFG! This story was so awesome! You should publish it! WOW! It has everything, action, lust, power, love... etc! I really enjoyed reading this story! Thank you so much for posting this story. This is one of those stories that makes me want to read again and again! Thanks again! Now I'm going to read the other one!

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LUV IT!!

That was awesome! But we do get a sequel...right? Please please please?!?!?! She is such an awesome huntress that she should have her own series of stories... Just a thought cuz I don't want to give her up...

Uh oh... She's in some trouble now...

Heh, heh...wow. Good chapter. The whole yearner thing could hurt her if she keeps drinking blood, but whatever that was hot. I love War's personality! Please update soon!

War is a cliche and so is your whole story. Sowwy =(

Uh oh! Good chapter! Okay, this Shinjo dude is like a stalker. Still lovin' Nathaniel and War though! Please update soon!