i loved it!
And the last line sent a shiver up my spine..
great job! :)

I love how this seems to deteriorate from the first stanza, which is so sweet - I like the idea of 'you pressed your smile against mine.' Also, it was great how you connected it to 'I'd wait forever to taste your smile once more' in the last stanza.

I adore how this is so cohesive. Not only do you have pretty phrases, they actually make sense. Really good job.

-pb

Beautifully simple, yet so emotional, especially the second stanza.

Sakina x

Oh, I love this! My favorite parts are the entire first stanza and the line "catching fire and praying for rain."

Thanks!

Em