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Laura Schiller 2007-11-29 . chapter 1
These are really good...but in "destroying the homes of animal's" you should have left out the apostrophe. Apostrophes are for posession: you can say "an animal's home" but when you just want to make a plural, there's no ' in the word.
I'm a bear for grammar and I can't help pointing these things out. Please don't take it personally!
Hawkmask 2007-11-20 . chapter 1
Wow, those were awesome man! As a fellow wolf lover, I have to say that these were just amazing and outstanding! Way to go! I especially like the "Sight" one! You might want to check out my stories! You might find them interesting!
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