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Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-08 . chapter 1
'Christina had a stomach made a steel' = made 'of', did you mean?

Aww, I felt oddly sorry for the alien mother and her eggs. =/
I didn't want them to be eaten, haha.

Great writing and descriptions overall; I like how you managed to give the reader a sense of your characters' personalities/morals/etc.
Nice ending, too! It was the last thing I expected.
Emeline67 2007-11-25 . chapter 1
this is a little strange, but i like the ending, do continue!
DorkMaster 2007-11-23 . chapter 1
That's funny as all hell.
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