 Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-08 . chapter 1'Christina had a stomach made a steel' = made 'of', did you mean?
Aww, I felt oddly sorry for the alien mother and her eggs. =/
I didn't want them to be eaten, haha.
Great writing and descriptions overall; I like how you managed to give the reader a sense of your characters' personalities/morals/etc.
Nice ending, too! It was the last thing I expected. |