Really good story. It kept me interested and I'm a picky reader. I'll look for one of your others to read. Good luck and keep up the great work.

That was good. (I wanted to review after i finished reading it) ^^ though i wish that i could have found out why weiss wanted to kill them, i found that the why was too vague. So... now I'm going to start reading the sequel and tell you what i think of that (you'll never get rid of me! mwah ha ha!) (sorry, it's really late) (parentheses are fun! ^^)

I love how all these women wear short sleeves in September. What we do for fashion, eh? ;)

This is so well thought out. For me, it's like watching "Lost" or something just as interesting. Good job.

So, a redhead serial killer. Man do i feel lucky to be a brunette. This is an interesting story.

thats good I cnts wait then you can write the other stories. I'm writing a book of my own but am currently running into problems with uploading it.

Awesome I hope you update very soon.

hey great story, i can't wait for more! im a sucker for murder stories, haha :D

When are you going to update? I really love this so far!

Very nice start :)

You already know I love this rewrite, LOL!

Hey, this is awesome! I love that you're rewriting it! Are you going to put in the scene with Dustin & Kim?

Oh my god, no.. you did not just.. this is a crime of all fanfiction/fictionpress crime. You took a familiar situation in a familiar movie, (clears throat) Red Eye and tried to make it into your own work? Not only that you stole their names too, Jackson and Lisa? You could have at least change the name and their description at that. But whatever, I still will enjoy the series. Will you be doing the whole assassin-kidnapper-Keefe plot too?