Oh!
I hope everything was okay in the end?
I like this, it's sweet.
Your brother is very lucky =)

Nice.
A lot of your stuff seems to relate to some of the stuff that's happened in my life lol.
My friend kept telling me some of the same things about a guy I started to like.
"Why can't you listen?"

Aww..sweet big sister,I just hope this doesn't happen to my brother in the near future.Anyways nice poem!Keep writing!

Hmm...brother's can be thickheaded, but you have to love them anyways. Nice poem.

:)

I can relate to this, although it wasn't a girl my brother was involved with, but a hypocritical "curch" of sorts. he's still there, but his involvement with the church is lessening. So I can definitely relate with the wondering why your brother is going the way that's not good for him! I hope things get better! This was a good poem.

~Maranwe Telrunya