i'm not sure if i understood it, probably not. but i loved it all the same.
despite all the angsty feeling i got from some words, it was actually funny. almost as if you were criticising others (and maybe yourself, too). it's brilliant.

I really enjoy this particular poem. You're a very strong writer, and oddly enough I understand every single analogy or image you've used. It's very fun to read.

Parts of it remind me of the Holywood album by a certain musician, just the images you choose.

Very good job!

Coma